At the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared to the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweighs the disadvantages?
The Youth population is irrefutably one of the most important asset of a nation. Certain countries have a huge number of the younger population than the older people. In my opinion, having more youngsters can contribute to our society because of their energy and skill, therefore the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages of having more youngsters in the country.
Employers, in the recent days seek for young people because of the talent and the stamina that they possess. In other words, it can be beneficial for the company, if they hire youngsters. Thereby, they can get successful outcomes and it helps them in ameliorating their business. To illustrate this, a survey conducted by the "Times new" magazine shows that 80% of the companies in Bangalore want to hire youngsters because of their efficiency. One more point worth considering is that they are extremely innovative and docile. Consequently, it can help them in contributing to make our lives better.
Older people can have plenty of experience when it comes to a job. Despite the experience, they do not have the energy to complete a task in a limited period of time. As most of the companies are in the rat race, they cannot afford more time for the experienced person's result. Therefore, it is evident that young people have the skill,but lack experience which is needed to be attained in their life. For instance, the famous entrepreneur, Walton mentions that he failed multiple times as a youngster, but when he was 60, he achieved his goal and he claims that experience is what made him who he is now.
In conclusion, certain tasks in life can be achieved even without experience, therefore, from my perspective, more youngsters in a country can be advantageous because of the hot skill and the physical strength they have.
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement. 56
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to he fully enjoyed , films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- At the present time, the population of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared to the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweighs the disadvantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... energy to complete a task in a limited period of time. As most of the companies are in the ra...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...evident that young people have the skill,but lack experience which is needed to be a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90641986141 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9820883579 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11118751921 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409603693255 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587629477784 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729390189045 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589309577421 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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