At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.
It is well-known that some countries have more population with younger ones. So therefore, this fact have both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion the positive implications of having a youthful population outweigh the negative ones. So this essay shall analyse merits and demerits of this issue in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, having a more population of younger ones leads to lack of professionals as there are many domains where only professionals are hired. Older people have more knowledge because they spend their most life on the studies, so they have a deep knowledge about everything as well as experience than younger ones. For example, for a specialist physician, the person should have 10 years university studies and many other professional certificate to applying this job. Which is not possible for younger ones. Not only this, the older have been face lot of problems in their life so at this stage they have an ability to sort out any problems. So this could help to from a less stressful life. Further, recent studies shown that, in the south area where the population is mostly of the younger ones and in this area the people are commit most of the crimes like as robbery and murders which is twice higher than the north, where the most of the population of older age group.
On the other hand, youngsters are more active than older as they have a healthier lifestyle because the youngsters are more aware about the heath. Where the older age group are facing many health related issues and they get retired from their work after 50's. Furthermore, older people are spend more money than young adults. For an instance, after the 50's most of the people are suffering from many health problems which takes a lot of amount of money than younger ones. Another positive aspect of having young adult population is that there are more chances of having outstanding sports professional because young people have more energy than old people to practice and become an excellent sport person.
Overall, after considering both views it is true to say that younger ones have more negative aspects than positive. Even though, there are some positive aspects of having an older population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'So' or 'therefore'.
Suggestion: So; Therefore
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Suggestion: committed
...er ones and in this area the people are commit most of the crimes like as robbery and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out the heath. Where the older age group are facing many health related issues an...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of amounts'.
Suggestion: a lot of amounts
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al because young people have more energy than old people to practice and become a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94385026738 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51205022861 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5706209001 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.722222222 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127940796386 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537128117163 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424429256435 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921300195023 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506672239397 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.