At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, more countries have a population with more young people than old people. In fact, that topic could have both advantages and disadvantages, In my opinion having outperformed some old people have negative consequences. This will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this topic to support both views.
In contrast to older people, young adults can bring a lot of positive effects from Science and technology while a large number of old people don’t meet so close with new technologies. Besides, young people have many disadvantages, like experience, can bring a lot of minuses in their career. For instance, a lot of adults people have a job in big companies in their sphere, where they can lead discoveries, however, older people can bring their brilliant experience from their life. In the end, young people can bring in country positive effect, if will be a tragedy, they cannot cope without experience.
On the other hand, old people know a lot of information about the history of some countries or cities. They can help young people with History. On the one hand, they have eldest methods in mathematics or physics. In contrast to young adults, older people cannot help you with Science, and they might discourage you. Finally, they can send you to do something unnecessary, like bring the water, it is unlikely when you do homework or a job. For example, older people help us with different subjects at school.
In conclusion, older and young people have a lot of advantages and disadvantages, so it is not good, that the population of young people is bigger than the population of older people. In my opinion, older people should extend their population
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th views. In contrast to older people, young adults can bring a lot of positive...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...fects from Science and technology while a large number of old people don't meet so close wit...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the eldest'.
Suggestion: have the eldest
...ple with History. On the one hand, they have eldest methods in mathematics or physics. In c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02142857143 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80494961576 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1300576872 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211914777297 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854545218867 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560839098193 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143692807658 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322534543748 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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