At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Recent studies show that the number of populations is increasing rapidly each year. Today, in some countries young people are much more inhabitants than elderly ones. This situation may lead to disadvantages and many advantages.
On one hand, we all know that young generation resembles the future of every country but every edge has a downside. First, youth has less experience about life in general, they don’t know how the country goes; they cannot handle certain things. Second, if the rate of the population of young people is higher than that of old ones, crimes and rubbing could speed in number. For example, studies showed that in a certain country the rate of crimes is higher than any other country same as the rubs of banks all due to the overweigh number of youth.
On the other hand, having a population of adults exceed the number of elderly can make a difference in a way. First, young people have more energy and can show much more productivity in something they do whether work or educative. Next, they are curious in a positive way for example, with the invention of technology and the fast lifestyle youth tend to search more about things that have to be done and go wider. Also have the patience to learn and explore new things.
In conclusion, youth could transform the country into a better place since they have the potential to do anything in this century. However, the more the number of young generation the more the productivity in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 255, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rk or educative. Next, they are curious in a positive way for example, with the invention of tech...
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Line 9, column 416, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ings that have to be done and go wider. Also have the patience to learn and explore ...
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Line 9, column 421, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...that have to be done and go wider. Also have the patience to learn and explore new t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50192491812 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1454840088 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199978154901 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765569976211 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411222755389 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137188424522 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504434506282 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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