Some people say that holding sport competitions can cause problems for the host country. Other disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sport competitions are held each year in many countries. Some people believe that such competitions, will cause problems for the host country, others disagree and think it has a positive reputation to their state.
On one hand, most people agree, since it will cause some problems and impact negatively on the country. First, many problems will happen from fans such as fights, erections or thefts. Second, there will be a big number of tourists, fans and this lead to increase in polluting the streets with waste and turning them into a garbage dump. However, expenses will increase on the country, to secure the safety for their locals and their properties, addition to the fans and tourists. For example, in Russia 2018 during World Cup competition, a combat happened between English fans and local people, which turned the streets into a fighting ring and many got injured. From my side I agree, since sport competitions drive many problems and increases country expenses.
On the other hand, some people disagree and think that this is a great step to their country, it will affect their economy positively. First, increase in tourists, people from all over the world are excited to visit new places, meet new tradition and culture. Second, such competitions help the country economically and open the opportunity for many investors to come and start new business. Moreover, people will meet new ones, there will be to homogeneity between people and cultures. For example, Vietnam in 2020 will welcome its first Formula 1 race, this will contribute to increase in economy and attract tourists to visit this Asian country yearly. In my opinion I disagree, where some points cause problems especially these days, due to increase in terrorism and lack of security in some countries.
Finally, some people believe that sport competitions will cause problems, others disagree. As I think, sport competitions will lead to many issues especially between fans and cause losses to the country economically and threat their national security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, moreover, second, so, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19033232628 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5942920284 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501510574018 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.729704055 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24885125777 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103081894174 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888793520008 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203036386128 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635758762236 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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