At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a fact that there are more young adults than senior citizens in the population of some countries. This trend would introduce both opportunities and challenges but from my perspective the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is clear that the young population would bring about several disadvantages. One evident weakness is youngful population would lack life experience. Consequently, young people have difficulty coping and solving crises because they haven’t had practical experience long enough as the elderly. In particular, lack of experience can cause loss and damage in work. Secondly, young societies are not keen on developing their culture and traditional activities. This is eventually can lead to the culture is assimilated, for example, most young Vietnamese do not know about traditional ethenic festival like: choi trau, dua thuyen ….
On the other hand, I argue that the advantages of this trend would prove to be more important. The first positive effect is that the large workforce who are creative, energetic people will be more productive than older people. Another reason is that youngful population is a healthier and faster technological adoptive generation. It means that the young have an ability to learn new things quickly and adapt to changing technology which can help develop countries.
In conclusion, there are minus points to the larger number of young adults than the eldery in some countries’s population. However, it seems that its advantages would be more important regarding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3950617284 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93521529556 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3876275507 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233154476361 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735921482477 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515063989318 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144297648456 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032548458152 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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