More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries.
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
There is an irrefutable fact that students tend to choose to study abroad to attend university and colleges these days. Some experts believe that there are huge benefits in studying in a foreign country, I firmly believe that there is a defensible basis for this argument.
On the one hand, people argue that the drawbacks of education abroad considerably outweigh its benifits. Firstly, overseas students are prone to depression when living away from home alone. For instance, there will be days when they are too busy to cook, always relying on noodles to prevent hunger. Moreover, foreign students have to endure the nostalgia for family, close friends whenever they encounter difficulties or get sick. Secondly, the language barriers and cultural differences make students bullied. This may lead to the isolation from the community and might cause a failure in studying.
On the other hand, I personally side with this idea. The advantages of study abroad are more significant than the downsides. The main reason for believe this is that overseas students become more independent by living alone in foreign country. For example, without the help of relatives living in your home country, you will definitely have to take care of everything from housing, eating, traveling, living and all the problems that arise in the life. You are trained in adapting to different situations to create foundations and experiences when you step into real life. Another positive aspect of this is you have the opportunity directly approach to advanced civilization, culture and society, especially be able to receive progressive and modern education.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that the preference of studying in a foreign country has its own benefits and drawbacks. Despite all the disadvantages, I believe that it has more advantages for students study at colleges and universities in foreign countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3178807947 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83698128064 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572847682119 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7880615732 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330132888202 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104494731454 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119370366603 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232237219017 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140845811987 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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