At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is universally accepted that young blood can be way more effective and productive compared to aged people. Today, it can be observed that the large proportion of some countries is youngsters compared to the ones who are retired. This essay will discuss the merits of having more young adults and the demerits of having old adults in a country.
To commence with the advantages, it is needless to say that people aging 20 to 40 years old are independent and also most likely to be having a high physical and mental strength, hence they usually work hard in order to fulfill their family’s essential needs. This does not only assist themselves but also aids the government in terms of being financially stable as they are likely to be paying taxes from their source of income. One prominent example can be the United States of America, about 65% of their population is young and pay the taxes from their regular earnings which leads the government to be financially strong, resulting as a superpower on planet earth.
Conversely, while it is often argued that older people are without any doubt the most experienced in a family, it is certain that their contribution with money to aid a family’s monthly expenses is likely to be zero. However, their consumption rate of food and other utilities are similar to other family members. This is not just a burden on the youngsters of a family but also a problem for the government because they have to pay a monthly stipend as a pension to these old people. For instance, a family will definitely have to struggle in fulfilling their needs if they had fewer youngsters than the older ones owing to their consumption rate which will be significantly high compared to their earnings.
Taking everything into consideration, it appears to me that a large number of young blood in a country is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified with the benefits they are providing by giving their blood and sweat in order to pay taxes which makes government stabilized despite the experience of old adults.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...to consideration, it appears to me that a large number of young blood in a country is an absolute...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84375 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71659694361 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9058526464 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134225803131 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569476384734 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400020884643 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093999552114 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459928044157 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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