At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Nowadays, several nations have a population of a huge number of the young generation, when compared with the number of elders. Though there are several disadvantageous sides regarding this trend, I strongly believe that the benefits of having numerous young people are more noticeable. This essay will first demonstrate the drawbacks of young adults due to their lack of greenness in work, followed by a discussion of the development of a country that can be pursued thanks to the young crowd.
To start with the disadvantage, although there are a number of young workforce, their experience at work is not enough. Therefore, they will need far more years to be trained, which causes the company to lose a lot of time and money; accordingly decreasing the process of the company. In addition, people who have the most kills in their respective fields might not generate new ideas, especially when having done their work, they do not like any new changes. This can be seen in some product factories, just being done at work with no creativity or new thoughts to contribute to the tactic of the company.
On the other hand, despite having huge negative factors related to the population is accounted for young adults, it can be overshadowed by some beneficial sides connected with this tendency. First and foremost, in most countries, having a young workforce is the key feature of pursuing development. A large number of the young labor force is considered as a valuable asset of the country. Youngers have a sufficient source of new ideas, be much more energetic to be willing to work, and simply adapt to the new environment with different work conditions. This also increases the improvement speed at a reasonable level attached to creating more advanced methods to finish work on time and efficiently.
Overall, those are very positive impacts since young forces help not only the company or themselves but also the country with their efforts and devotion. The younger have much determination to try their best to complete their work successfully and also contribute to society rather than those drawbacks mentioned above.
To sum up, notwithstanding having aforementioned disadvantages regarding a large number of young population in some nations than elders, there are loads of benefits that come from them like a country's development can be chasing by young labor forces or companies will achieve more success in a competitive market if they recruit as many as young adults in virtue of creativity, energy, and the ability to acquaint with other different work environments come and work for their business.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...he key feature of pursuing development. A large number of the young labor force is considered as ...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...their efforts and devotion. The younger have much determination to try their best to...
^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... aforementioned disadvantages regarding a large number of young population in some nations than e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08837209302 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87487390087 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504651162791 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.785884764 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.866666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267588558844 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101626147974 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833549339888 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161916920664 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660850119382 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...he key feature of pursuing development. A large number of the young labor force is considered as ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...their efforts and devotion. The younger have much determination to try their best to...
^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... aforementioned disadvantages regarding a large number of young population in some nations than e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08837209302 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87487390087 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504651162791 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.785884764 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.866666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267588558844 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101626147974 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833549339888 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161916920664 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660850119382 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.