At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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...n many of our nations all over the world . However this trend may has its both pos...
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...e hand : there are many reasons why this increase is vital to our countries . ...
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...this increase is vital to our countries . First of all , nowday our world beco...
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...vital to our countries . First of all , nowday our world becomes more convenien...
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...e times due to technological development . younger people are more adapted to the...
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...imes due to technological development . younger people are more adapted to these chang...
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...opment . younger people are more adapted to these changes than eldery . As their ...
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...re adapted to these changes than eldery . As their mind are more creative in this...
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...ore creative in this technological world . For example the amazing software produc...
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...ample the amazing software product which is discovered by young creator , this ...
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... which is discovered by young creator , this programme is providing our world w...
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...ndless benefits in all ways of our lives . the advantages of young generation no...
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...oung population are more fit than eldery , so they can be engaged in hard works s...
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...ard works such as constructing buildings . in contrast : this increase will lead...
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...employment rate among younger generation . As chances are provided by goverment ar...
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...their adverse effects on our communities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93980153375 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8380600643 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7142857143 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842217881621 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296807326543 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275978765775 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046769330865 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312066498166 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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