At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number young adults, compared with the number older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
As a result of the development of medical treatment, lots of babies have been born so that there are more young people than older ones in some countries. In my opinion, the pros of this issue outweigh the cons.
To begin with, the young generation is active, energetic and can contribute considerably to the economy of a nation. They come up with many new ideas and aren’t prevented by traditional beliefs. They have health and energy to do everything creative, hopefully, while being strongly affected by superstitions, the old generation are afraid of risky things. Well-educated young people are the best resource a nation can have and their contribution to the economic development of a country is absolutely higher than elder generation. In addition, the young are the active and powerful workforce, who can lead the significant growth of a country. They are the earning members, while some elderly depend on them. Moreover, young generation is the one who learn new things faster and easily approach technology especially in the fourth industrial revolution nowadays. They can share ideas globally, learn new skills from the others through the internet. That is the best environment for the immature come up with surprised and hopeful invention so they are better leaders. For instance, an artificial leaf has recently invented by a group of young teenagers in Vietnam, which can extract oxygen from water, is fundamental of global science development.
The contribution of elder people, however, couldn’t be denied because they have done their own parts in protecting and developing the country. They have valuable experience and historical knowledge about the weather, soil, water, which are very vital for many people. They have taught their childlike kids lots of social skills, which are very important for them in their future.
In a nutshell, young population has a vital role in developing a country. Having powerful and active workforce is beneficial and affects significantly the overall growth of the country.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 91
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number young adults, compared with the number older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 84
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Suggestion:
...ects significantly the overall growth of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29230769231 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88672784189 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9797475668 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.176470588 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100944894143 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035824637458 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266112050567 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655080381542 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329998220657 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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