"Prevention is better than cure."
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people claim that a large proportion should be diverted from medical treatment to spending on public health education and preventative measures. This essay agrees with this statement and would discuss the reason why prevention is better than cure.
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Firstly, public health education aims to raise public awareness. Promoting the importance of prevention allows people to pay attention to eating, habits, etc. Those who experienced SARS in 2003 knew the importance of hygiene. Hong Kong, for example, during 2003 a man who traveled from mainland China to Hong Kong did not know he was sick bring the illness to different counties and cities. Aher that, many people aware that washing their hands, wearing mask enables people to prevent illness. It is important for people to be educated in public health. Given prevention allows people to decrease the probability to be sick so public health education should take into account.
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Secondly, medical treatment aims to help people recover from the disease. Given medical treatment need to help those who already being sick this is the step after disease happened. To maintain a place's health need to step by step. Public health promotion could address the root of the problem. Medical treatment is a method to recover those who are sick instead of preventing people to sick.
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To sum up, I do think that prevention is better than cure, it is important for a country to promote public health. Public health should be the significant part of country's health budget to maintain a place's awareness of health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'places'' or 'place's'?
Suggestion: places'; place's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'places'' or 'place's'?
Suggestion: places'; place's
...of countrys health budget to maintain a places awareness of health.
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... maintain a places awareness of health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54399424849 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4840609476 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339689447183 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123314553714 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10589728067 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268409052025 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151826889211 0.056905535591 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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