It is very obvious to say; " Prevention is better than cure. Lifestyles of people are changing day by day. Today they are suffering a number of different diseases. So it becomes the responsibility of government to look after this matter. Government must allocate a significant amount of money on spreading health education and taking preventative measures rather than building hospitals for treatments. In this essay, I will explain why providing education about health is more important.
Today people are more prone to diseases than earlier times. They spend enormous amount of money on the treatment while some donot afford to get such treatments. In such a context government should make a budget to spend money on providing health education to people other than in making huge hospitals. They can do this so by allocating a specific amount on health teaching system. As an excellent illustration, government should spend money on campaign, road shows or rellies in order to provide awareness among people. In this way, people will not get affected by the diseases if they are aware. This will help them to save a lot of money which they can invest in some other activities. In addition to this, government can also put protective measures and warning on harmful products.
Another possible reason is that today most of the populate is suffering from diabetes and heart diseases. These problems assault people. Government can invest a part of its health budget on preventative measures. For example, it can build parks, gardens and encourage people to do exercise. This would make them fit and will protect them from harmful diseases. Furthermore, this will contribute to country's economy as fitness of people will lead to more productivity. This, in turn, will result in economic growth of a country.
In conclusion, considering the above reasons I tend to believe that government should spend money on providing health related education. Nonetheless, a significant amount of money is also required for treatment facilities but curing before hand is more important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, nonetheless, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20597014925 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83641156457 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1154821901 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8260869565 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5652173913 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208877354558 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596846372177 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841371310194 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133638868427 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572439042183 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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