We are living in a modern world where everyone is busy in earning hefty amount of money. In this hoard of earning more, they tend to migrate to some other cities or countries in order to get employment and raise their standard of living. Due to all this, children are effected the most. Some dwellers always raises a question, "Whether shifting of families to some other nations put a negative or positive impact on children?" Through this essay, I am going to discuss both views and shape up my opinion by the end.
On the darker side of the argument, people tend to believe that immigrating to other countries put a negative impact on kids. They stronger their view point by saying that a child is like a flower who get easily dried when plucked off. Shifting to some other country will bring a new environment for them. They have to leave their existing friends and shall face a difficulty in making new ones. Moreover, they will have to adjust to the new surroundings which can have a great impact on their confidence level. A report published in Health journal showed that 70% of children become introvert as their parents move to different country for work. Hence, it is proved that there is a drastic impact on children.
On brighter side, some people says that there are positive points too. They booster their saying by claiming that children will able to face challenging environment which might help them in future. In addition to this, by migrating, they will be able to adopt me cultures and gain knowledge. Their confidence level will also be risen up as they will make new friends. For instance, in many countries, children from other nations are provided with special interactive classroom program in which they are able to learn new languages and make friends of new nationalities. Most impressing point is that children will also spread their own culture and tradition in that particular country. This will leave a positive impact on them and will also rise their confidence level.
To sum up, weighing both points of views, it is believed that children should be provided the environment of love and care ; no matter in home country or the other. In such a way they will face every challenge with a smile and will be least affected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77551020408 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55228335066 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.574671228 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202312054555 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646546375414 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660788974263 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130400820494 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621408721859 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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