THE PREVENTION OF HEALTH PROBLEMS IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN TREATMENT AND MEDICINE. GOVERNMENT FUNDS SHOULD REFLECT THIS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE?
It is a fact that prevention is the cure of all ailments, so to be healthy and safe, people should take precautionary measures to restrain them free of diseases. It is debatable as many people believe that the Government should spend its more funds to prevent diseases, whereas other people argue that the officials should spend money on treatment and medicines.
We can indeed prevent many diseases if we follow precautions. Firstly, the Government should make people aware of pivotal measures to avert diseases, and for this, the Health care professionals with the cooperation of Government officials should hold educative shows and programs in communities and schools. For example, toothache and removal of a tooth can be averted if people and children at a very early age know how to look after their teeth by correct brushing techniques and to follow other precautionary steps. Secondly, the Government should focus more on research to prevent diseases; for example, scientists researches on the cure of polio vaccination, and today world is free of one of the primary illness which affected many lives in the past.
However, some illnesses cannot be averted, such as many types of cancers that have no cure. However, with the help of medicines and treatment, life expectancy can be increased. Also, some diseases, if not treated at the right time, can become life-threatening conditions. For example, a typical common cold can result in pneumonia if not treated at the right time.
To conclude, indeed, the Government should spend money on research for the cure of any disease; however, it should also make sure that those patients who are already suffering from non-curable health problems receive the necessary treatment, which makes their life easy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20350877193 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80636834598 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0208845932 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.818181818 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177126585785 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642889739031 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651667313644 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112055600224 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578944002188 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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