Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However a more effective solution is to provide people a better education agree or disagree .
with the steady growth in modernisation, The life style of people have been greatly affected. they have achieved various milestones; However, some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever. one such issue here is of Whether prison is the best way to reduce the problem of crime or provide a better education to people? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through example, asserts and shape up my opinion by the end .
Taking one side of argument, there are people who believe that prison is common in most countries the problem of crime. The raise many assertions in defence such as if authorities give punishment as a prison to people as it is extremely beneficial because people do not commit crime again and again even it is lesson for the other people, if they commit a crime government give a strong punishment. Moreover, it is quite good way for the safety of society because people can take participate in social activities without any fear .So ,prison is the best way to solve the problem of crime.
On the flip side, there are antagonists to this asserts who believe that a more effective solution is to provide people are better education. They bolster their view point by claiming that the main reason people commit crime is that people are uneducated as they do not have a job and not earm money for fulfil their needs as that time they commit crime like robbery, snatch expensive things .The best solution for this government should open new school and college and provide free education to the poor people as they do not commit crime.
As ,we have seen there are numerous answers to this question. On balance, However, I tend to believe that authorities should be implement some laws as people not commit crime but do not give prison punishment on small mistake and government should provide good education system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82608695652 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48436917841 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509316770186 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3589889965 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.272727273 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334628018149 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132695419134 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113937658154 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189755301824 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609458683415 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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