Pros and cons of intelligent robots
In the digital society, IT devices gains great popularity and becomes dominant all over the world. However, everything has two sides and so does the robot. In this speech, I will give a deeper outlook in two perspectives of this issue.
On the one hand, A.I robots by all means becomes an indispensable gadget which enhance our quality of lives. First and foremost, because robots are programmed by a group of different outstanding scientists with a purpose of performing task faster more accurate than people. As a result, they can replace workers in some specific job especially industrial spheres. For example, a great number of robots are applied into assembly lines in order to mass produce and boost working productivity. Secondly, intelligent robots are machines which can endure in a severe working environment and hardships without having a break. Therefore, they can replace people in some outer space missions requiring a great deal of force and facing up with fatal calamities. Without the robots, people may meet up with some daunting challenges in their lives.
On the other hand, at odds with some benefits, robotic machine also triggers off several disadvantages which can pose a serious threat to mankind. Firstly, people seem to be over reliant on the amenities it gave that they engage in a passive lifestyle with an unoccupied attitude. Consequently, this will degrade the development of civilization due to a lack of creativity and reduce potential workforce which may aggravate the state of jobless situation. Secondly, hackers which is a detrimental factor can simply hack and take control of host operating system. Hence, these illicit people can deliberately cause damage to the process of working and try to blackmail some industrial factories.
To sum up, although robots have a great multitude of bright sides, I believe that there remains some shortcomings worth concerning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84294379929 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640522875817 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5823044218 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981522413925 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334206140096 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423677976012 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587995117939 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305939391433 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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