By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, many countries have forbidden the death penalty as it has always been a contentious issue almost everywhere in the world. In this essay, my opinion against the capital punishment will be discussed.
One of the most significant argument against the death penalty is that killing someone as a punishment for a murder is a contradiction. The reason for this is that it is difficult to explain to the population why murdering a human can be acceptable under certain conditions. For example, in some countries the death penalty is still applicable, however it is frequently misunderstood by the inhabitants and might lead to dramatic events. This is because if the society is allowed to murder someone for justice, some people may believe that they can harm others if they have reasons to.
Furthermore, another significant argument is that human mistakes are possible and relatively frequent. Consequently, convicted murderers could be found innocent even if the justice has sanctioned them to the capital punishment. For instance, a few cases have been reopened because technological means have improved over the years and it was discovered that a criminal who had been killed was in fact non-guilty of murder. Therefore, because of this possibility, I believe that humans should always be kept alive in prison so that they can be free if needed.
To summarise, I firmly believe that the death penalty is not an appropriate punishment even for murderers. Indeed, not only can human mistakes happen during investigations and trials, but it is inappropriate for a society to condemn an act that they are allowed to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17735849057 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01904244779 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6913520893 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18464738984 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709100232618 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433008115207 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111469079776 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396685192214 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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