Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
In recent years, the proportion of people living in a flat has increased. While some people think living in a flat is more convenient, others believe that a house is a more peaceful environment. In this essay, both benefits and drawbacks will be discussed.
On the one hand, living in a house is a dream for most families. The reason for this is that when you live in a house you are often far away from your neighbours. Therefore, you are living in a quieter environment compared to a flat. To cite an example, in a house you will not be disturbed by any noise whereas in a flat you will probably hear when your neighbours are watching tv or when a baby is crying. A second advantage of living in a house is the possible presence of a garden. Owning a garden is seen as a luxury for a great part of the population as it enables children to play outside easily instead of playing indoors.
On the other hand, there are also advantages of living in an apartment. The first significant positive aspect is that it is not as expensive as living in a house. As a result, people who live in a flat may have more money to spend for their holidays or entertainment, for example. A second benefit is that a flat is often smaller than a house, thus it is more easily cleaned-up. For instance, it can be essential for families as workers are busier than ever and do not necessarily have the time to take care of a home.
To summarise, although there are benefits of living in a flat such as the cost-efficiency, I do believe there are more advantages of living in a house. Therefore, people living in a house can have a more peaceful daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39672131148 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72418572288 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468852459016 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2582106947 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449985495525 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174922834766 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12790905127 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309917569784 0.151304729494 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070291578411 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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