Art and music is a part of our life which relieves our mental stress.In my opinion art and music should be mandatory at school inorder to have a balanced mental life. Apart from academic knowledge, students should have some kind of non-academic activities such as arts and music to find their inner qualities. Not only Albert Einstein become famous, but also Justin beiber as well as Michael Jackson.
Many studies have shown that the students are struck in their academic studies and are not stress free.Majority of students suicide due to the pressure or strain in their studies.So if we could add on some kind of leisure to their curriculum, definitely it will help them to have a mental strength.
In my opinion, every school regardless of divisions should have arts and music periods allocated in their daily timetable. And the students who show their qualities should be recognised and be given appraisal.
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also, but, if, so, well, apart from, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97385620915 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62165653781 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5324324268 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276119447135 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144059155475 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125408596695 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195405408733 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139565889375 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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