Q:- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
many people consider that it is better to accept a bad situation. other people believe that people, who are involved in a difficult position, should find a way to make breakthroughs. In my opinion, people should never give up grasping the chance. And the reasons are mentioned below.
On the one hand, it is understandable that many people are willing to accept a bad situation, as there are huge risks if people tend to struggle to find improvement. For example, some employees may have an unsatisfactory job and complaint seems frequent to them, but they won’t make any changes. considering about reasons why they just keep the situation is they feared it is possible that they will not only lose their present job but also miss the opportunity. Meanwhile, they have to feed their family and carry heavy responsibilities.
On the other hand, other people argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. While people need to overcome the huge risk, they could receive incredible profit if they address. As it is considered that success is constituted with not only intelligence and endurance but also some fortune, most people can’t make progress on a large extent, but the process of making improvement can also become a valuable experience to people’s career. they could store strength and wait for the next chance, as challenge reality is addictive.
In conclusion, every people have their own way to face bad situations. Whether they fight or accept the situation are acceptable, but, in my view, I encourage everybody endeavor to improve their situation and make breakthroughs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09811320755 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95295014525 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0502948717 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258254112502 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966415283275 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107989950654 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152301365318 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408802231392 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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