The qualities that make someone admirable
Do you admire someone? Would you like to resemble your appreciated individual? For the greater part of us, we have an excellent individual in our lives who is our life role model. Along with the development of society, it is thought that people with money, status, or pretty are admirable people. But are those criteria that make someone stand out? I am of opinion that a person who possesses the 3 main qualities of optimism, humility, and knowledge is influential.
Firstly, people who are admirable are optimistic. They can give inspirational ideas to help people overcome fate or adversity. They have learned to accept hardships, interpret them positively and use them to impact their lives in a rather good way. For instance, a sexual assault victim may use their story to inspire others who have gone through a similar situation and advice them to give up out of any negative idea they had.
Secondly, humility is also an important quality that makes an admirable person. Humble people are much more impressive than boasters. Humility helps them understand their strengths and weaknesses and then they can improve themselves better.
Lastly, a knowledgeable person can be respected by people. Knowledge is a vital element in our society and the world as a whole, so they understand how central it is in a push to improve their life. They can become business owners, spokespersons, or work in governmental institutions thanks to the knowledge and experience they gain.
To sum up, knowing about the qualities that make an admirable person helps us to know how to improve ourselves because sometimes we are also an example for others to admire. These three qualities optimism, humility, and knowledge will help us become more similar to our life role models.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'stands'.
Suggestion: stands
...ut are those criteria that make someone stand out? I am of opinion that a person who ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07167235495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78158043508 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.041072833 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224921287914 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794739738024 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111069467776 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129543599323 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997467259521 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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