The quality of our life has drastically changed with the advancement of modern technology.Discuss the advantages of technology.
Nowadays,the technology plays a vital role in the world which transformed the lifestyle of person tremendously.I am going to discuss the merits of technology in upcoming paragraphs.
It is worthily considered that technology change the present generation whereas,in past people were backward and their method of working were not developed.But,today there are a lots of innovations and inventions.To illustrate, there is a rapid change in the version of televisions.In first there was a availability of black and white tv but after the increment in technology the black and white tv was replaced with color tv.And in present,there is a trend of LEd's which is more convenient and less bulky.
Some people strengthen their views by saying that technology is fruitful for students in their study.Students can solve their maths problem and other difficulties.Moreover,there has plethora of websites such as monster.com,naukri.com which is used to get vacant job position.As a result, it is right to said that technology helps the people in every field of life.For instance,the traditional shopping has changed with the virtual shopping which is economical in the terms of time and cost.
To conclude,it can be said that technology has a positive effects on humans and change the living standard dramatically.However,it has a big impact on the development of economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4858490566 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.91856802025 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.102168433 49.4020404114 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.75 106.682146367 273% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.7667163134 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0722725257651 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039751658089 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00934331241042 0.0667982634062 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039751658089 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00934331241042 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.45 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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