With the rise in modernization,the lifestyle of person has change tremendously.Some denizens love fashionable costumes according to the trend.I am going to discuss the reasons and whether it is postive or negative things.
It is worthly considerd that fashion is charm which is adopted by both men and women.The first and foremost reason is people are following celebrities to look beautiful.Mostly everbody copy the dressing sense of others rather than other thing.Secondly, people wants to wear those clothes which are trending nowadays and do not consider its cost.They are ready to purchase expensive things.For instance, the supply of branded clothes is increasing which persuade the individual to buy it.
As every coin has two sides similarly adopting a fashion has pros and cons but fashion is more advantageous.In this era the person with good personality has more chances to get early opportunities.So, person need a perfect apperance which is possible with adequate wearing.To illustrate,name and fame is also win by good physical qualities rather than intellectual skills,as models are getting handsome amount of salary by performing varoius shows at international level.
To conclude,it is undoubtable to say that fashion is mainstream in the world.However, it gives platform to people to earn money by their beauty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56097560976 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36488497903 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678048780488 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.834967763 49.4020404114 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.0 106.682146367 267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.25 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143580124173 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686474059997 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030412638774 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686474059997 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030412638774 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 13.0946893788 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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