The range and quality of food has been improved with the development of technology
and scientific advances. Some people think it is good and others think it is harmful. Dicuss
both sides and give your opinion
Thanks to the development of technology as well as many scientific inventions, the resource
of food tend to reach higher standards year by year. However, the impacts of human on
food has evolved as a major topic of concern in modern society. Some believe that this
phenomenon will helps human in many aspects, while I’m of the opinion that it’s drawbacks
overcome the benefits.
To a certain content, I agree that many kinds of the quality food provided in large amounts
by technology would bring many plus point. First, famine around the world be solved
completely. By the mass-producted ability of modern technological approaches, people in
lacking food areas like Africa, where starving - the most prior problem – severe local
resident, might be provided enough food to serve through non-government organizations.
Second, the price for food seems to decrease when scientists could enhance the quantity
of agricultural products to overpass the demand of customers. For example, some rare fruits
such as strawberries, blueberries in Vietnam could have the same price as other tropic fruit
when they are supplied in an mass amount in any market or supermarket.
In the other hand, I can not deny the way people impact on food that have leaved many
disadvantages which do harm to people as well as agriculture. Mainly because people are
deterring the natural development of many resources. To be more obvious, when scientists
create a new gene of plants or grow livestock unmoral to reach the highest productivity, it
might lead to the extinct of the original version. Besides, human health could get negative
effects by eating these food. Scientists try to make food more quality but some farmers
want to earn more money so they add chemical which help plants grow faster and always in
a fresh appearance. And as a result, people consuming those food could easy get serious
illnesses like cancer.
All in all, although this trend could reduce the price of food as well as solve the issue of
famine around the world, it’s drawback might affect to the health of consumers and the
existence of many plans and animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ome believe that this phenomenon will helps human in many aspects, while I'm o...
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...uality food provided in large amounts by technology would bring many plus point....
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Suggestion: Effects
...ides, human health could get negative effects by eating these food. Scientists try to...
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
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...help plants grow faster and always in a fresh appearance. And as a result, peop...
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Suggestion: this food; those foods
...ance. And as a result, people consuming those food could easy get serious illnesses like...
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...ct to the health of consumers and the existence of many plans and animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24079320113 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72617018804 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589235127479 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4838915562 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138388782463 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472716277633 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283971138045 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348898469229 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345741758587 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.