Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today's world, there are numerous options person has to keep himself/herself occupied. reading books and watching television are few of them. it depends what kind of taste one has.
book reading is one of the favourite hobby from older times when tv and other online stuff was not easily available. People of older generation were quite addicted to book reading as it was one of the good source of gaining information of any type. there are many authors who made big name in the writing industry due to this. Humans of all ages generally like reading books as it is of the early things they get access to when they are in school. it makes one's mind active as by reading they gain knowledge and expand their horizons.
Whereas, on the other hand, watching television or movies is now gaining more popularity due to digitalization world. due to rise in internet popularity and easy accessibility there are high percentage of population who is getting addicted to it.
In my view, by watching tv or movies, one gets into imagination rather than reading books as the visuals which they see in front of their eyes, most of them directly correlate to them and can easily start imagining himself or herself. one of the recent example is where most of the new movie heros are into body building and displaying their bodies on the big screen due to which the young generation have start following the same trend because they start imaging themself in those physiques.
So, in a nutshell by watching tv one gets more imagination rather than reading books.
- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other country , while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because all information can be seen on T.V and the internet . Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'options'' or 'option's'?
Suggestion: options'; option's
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Suggestion: Reading
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: Book
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: Due
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Suggestion: One
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, as to, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82222222222 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53903408829 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9188032689 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.153846154 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144646521626 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609327164234 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045799681638 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874981720839 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570725442891 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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