Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other country , while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because all information can be seen on T.V and the internet . Discuss both views and give your own opinion .
there was always an enthusiasm in people knowing about the culture and living style of people of other countries. however, there is always a debate in regards to visiting the country physically to experience the same or on the other hand checking the information on television or internet.
In recent years, with wide expansion of aviation industry and high-rise in middle-man income, there is a high percentage which is going abroad to feel the first hand experience of the food, culture and the lifestyle of that particular country. From my point of view, this is good thing one can do to feel the same. For example, when you travel to a specific country, you get to taste their food, feel the vibe, you can talk to the local people and understand their culture and exchange yours as well.
however, the specific information is also available online on internet nowadays and most of the people are happy to check the same online. It helps them save the money and time, but they miss on the real time experience.
In a nut-shell, one can get plethora of information and experience when they visit abroad rather than checking online.
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- Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other country , while other people think it is not necessary to travel abroad because all information can be seen on T.V and the internet . Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
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... culture and exchange yours as well. however, the specific information is also avail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83163265306 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56016219128 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576530612245 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1478012019 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.375 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190045535747 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770081937746 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477327013394 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10757633687 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477432512296 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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