Recent research has shown a spike in people checking their health related problems on the internet rather than relying on authorised practitioners. What are the reasons behind this trend? Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
It is a burgeoning trend that, for checking health problems and diagnose diseases by the help of website, instead of approaching a licenced medical practitioner. However, there are many reliable sites and multitude of example with lay out would be captivate peoples mind and that will be the exact reason behind such attitude. At once, believing this kinds of internet resources would be fruitless and may lead to detrimental effect on peoples health.
Artificial intelligence has been escalating rapidly. Owing to the fact that, peoples mind would be often believing the detailed description of diseases, signs and symptoms, preventive measures and examples from various places. Certain online sites has option for instant doubt clearance facilities, illustration of each and every parts of organs, blood vessels, bones and so on. By the virtue of that, many people addicted and relying such sites rather than a doctor. Moreover, in certain situations, some physicians also checking their doubts online for the clarification. For instance, in earlier, many medical practitioners often carrying a medical books to rewind and memorize the things which they studied, recently, books were replaced the position in fact.
Notwithstanding, make use of internet for the health related issues may lead to pernicious impact on once life. Because, investigate a disease would be a systematic and sincere responsibility of a doctor, and he may diagnose by physical examination, history collection, past history and so on. Thereby, picturising a disease on online sites might be varying person to person, gender, and even socio-economic factors. Secondly, many online medical sites would not have a licence to convey information's. In brief, there were no guarantee that, the explanations are true or, treatment by the reckless notes would lead to serious illness and demise to the core. Furthermore, many illness had relatively same signs and symptoms, and so that peoples may get confusion and that would lead to wrong diagnose and deleterious impacts to some extent.
To conclude, it is true that, searching internet browsing for health issues has been surging by the fact of fascinating detailed descriptions. Nevertheless, pop across diagnosis based on online sites may have adverse effect on public health, thereby, excessive reliance on such sites would have negative impact on people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'would' and 'be'.
Suggestion: would often be
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Line 5, column 672, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun illness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many illnesses'.
Suggestion: many illnesses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, even so, for instance, in brief, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45945945946 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93558306273 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564864864865 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0111331816 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.823529412 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15372500406 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499622022587 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455652163398 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993267496829 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520585777303 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.