Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Many people believe that, university graduation would offer a stringent job instead of ascertain employment without degree. While, others oppose that, having a work placement and practice would be better than a handful of degree certificate. However, in my opinion, getting a guaranteed job by the help of a valid university degree would be more esteemed and safe than soft skills and inborn talented job without hold a university approval.
On the one hand, many people argued to grasp a university degree by the fact of safe and secure job placement and get a promotion in the future. In other words, employ those who have a valid certificate of graduation, may enhance the position and job description to some extent. To illustrates, most of the companies and organisations needs the graduates or post graduates because, such employees may lead the company to the top. Academic knowledge may help them to tackle the problems, critical thinking based on theoretical aspects, improvise the institution in technical, financial, and so on. Similarly, university degree often help the graduates to approach any organisations not only in residential but also globally.For example, multinational companies recruiting many employers all over the world based on academic level.
On the other hand, some people oppose the mentioned statement, and emphasize that, using soft skills or early employment would be better irrespective of university degree. In brief, a person with inborn talent of certain areas like, mechanical or electrical and agricultural jobs may flourish through the practical experience. Deprive of time by studying, theoretical knowledge expansion might be fruitless in terms of soft skills and talented jobs. For example, some people have had an ability to repair machines, electronic equipment's, and so on may help them to take as a carrier, and experience would thrive them in practical ways. Furthermore, high cost tuition fees, and study material and resources often make many people to go back from the dream of graduation and poverty lead to get a job as soon as possible indifferent to others.
To sum up, there were many merits and demerits of the statement related to job and university degree explained above. In my perspective, if the person have a goal, time and money to hold a graduation would be better for the adorable employment opportunities world wide and standard of life rather than skilled worker in local areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, in brief, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25445292621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9423187466 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529262086514 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.4407586212 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2557382534 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875044816061 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589627588666 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164405950673 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694992422635 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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