In modern days, one of the controversial issues related to whatever graduating from a university is a need or no need in order to get a superb job. Although some people strongly believe that graduating a university need to get a good job, the rest of them think that people can go straight into work they wanted. In this essay, I am going to examine from both sides of view and represent a conclusion.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that after students have finished university, they will get a certificate from the university that is a validation of knowledge. In addition, because your diploma assesses your knowledge required in the board of work, most companies just require this certificate. Generally, If you have not a certificate of a good university, nowadays, finding a good job you wanted is almost impossible. The primary reason for believing this is that the apple, android companies are requiring a diploma from some specific universities from employment.
On the other hand, it is argued why some people are working in famous companies without a degree from the university. Actually, they firstly focus on their projects, which bring a succeed that is proof of knowledge. As a result, this succeeds can substitute diploma. after that, they can work in any company. For example, Steve jobs in 2013 dropped out from Harvard University in order to finish a project of facebook. Eventually, he has become famous and wealthy.
In conclusion, as we have seen, this question is uneasy to discuss. However, even though in some cases, a certificate does not need to get a job, I tend to undoubtedly agree that nowadays diploma from a university is safer to guarantee good work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly focus on their projects, which bring a succeed that is proof of knowledge. As a result...
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..., this succeeds can substitute diploma. after that, they can work in any company. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88659793814 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8488697921 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8594955634 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34363178645 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101544049456 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917198345774 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210312303146 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754544970035 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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