In recent years life has become more stressful than it has ever been . As a consequence more and more people are suffering from stress related problems. What factors are contributing to this increase and what do you think can be done to overcome the current problems .
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the recent years, man's quest for material possessions and rat race for success have led to a life full of stress . These days more and more people are suffering from various physical and psychological problems, which are caused by various tensions in life . These problems can be solved to a large extent by getting involved in leisure time activities and proper time management .
To begin with , nowadays we are living in a world, where people are concerned about leading a luxurious life , and this prompts them to make money even at the cost of ignoring basic human values . To make it clear , these days people are trying to obtain an economically secure life . Hence , for gaining economic stability , they have to work hard , as a result they may not get adequate time to spend with their family . This will lead to various family problems and would indeed affect the mental status of these individuals .
Further more , we are living in a competetive world . In order to gain superiority in the market, industries are putting stiff targets and demanding deadlines for employees and this is one of the contributing factor for stress among workers . Apart from that , universities are churning out large number of graduates and this attributes to unemployment among graduates . As a result individuals have to work hard to obtain a job. Unemployment is also leads to tensions in life .
However , problems associated with this can be reduced to a large extent by balancing the work and leisure time . Employers should provide adequate free time for employees and they should be allowed to participating in activities , which are meant to relieve stress and rejuvenate mind . For example , participating in activities like yoga , listening to music and playing tennis have a great role in relieving the tensions .
To put it in a nutshell , stress is inevitable in todays life . Problems associated with stressful life could be reduced by keeping a balance between work and free time .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'apart from', 'for example', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240997229917 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.191135734072 0.155533422707 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0858725761773 0.0946595960268 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0304709141274 0.0501214627716 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0249307479224 0.0437548338989 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12188365651 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0775623268698 0.0403226058552 192% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.78426195463 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0526315789474 0.0326793684256 161% => OK
Particles: 0.00277008310249 0.00163938923432 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.0831024930748 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0221606648199 0.021408717616 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00831024930748 0.011925033212 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2015.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 356.0 316.048096192 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66011235955 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331460674157 0.374742101984 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230337078652 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157303370787 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109550561798 0.137316102897 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78426195463 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480337078652 0.56093040696 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.9497941175 60.7387585426 82% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9411764706 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8649232062 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.529411765 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 3.99599198397 901% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.9748843358 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.78651685393 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391176827811 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0773305884448 0.102741220458 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0540822141985 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53233984422 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111331652905 0.148594505496 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150939564059 0.134430193775 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531364100379 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.344680867337 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0379410224926 0.0638462369009 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255005627804 0.228012699653 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509914359338 0.058150111329 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.