In recent years, many governments have brought in laws to ban smoking in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Smoking is injurious to health as governments are taking steps such as banning smoking in public areas, namely bars, restaurants, and offices. Despite the fact that there are numerous benefits that tobacco industry brings to government, I agree with the idea of completely ban smoking. This is because it is not only harmful to those who smoke but also to those who are nearby.
On the one hand, tobacco industry brings multiple benefits to the government and to society indirectly. companies which are producing them pays high amount of taxes every year. In india, for example, these companies are required to 28% income tax annually. This money can be invested in medical research, healthcare, and education. However, not banning smoking could be beneficial for short term, but long term it has severe consequences on society.
On the other hand, banning smoking could be beneficial to society because it has severe effects on health and can cause diseases such as lung cancer,heart attack, and asthma. However, symptoms of these are long-term but the result is inevitable. A research conducted at Stanford University, California in 2015 in which they found that one out of five Americans die due to smoking. Furthermore, 65% of cancer cases were found addicted to smoking.
To conclude, while it is true that the tobacco production companies do benefit government and society in the form of tax and employment prospects, the public's health is more important. I personally believe smoking should be banned but it should be done in such a way that employees and economy does not suffer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15325670498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7358951117 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1100045786 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136932294162 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426464205653 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490351924051 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888391858391 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507787673649 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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