In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping? Is this a positive or a negative development?
Currently, shopping in a mall or large shopping centres are becoming more popular in urban life. Therefore, local trade has stopped due to the lack of customers which have various disadvantages in our daily life. This essay will discuss why the negative effects of this development influence the local business and also give some advantage of large shopping centre.
In most of the city centre, the opening of large shopping markets is increasing day by day. There are some significant reasons behind this development. Most of these markets are situated very close to the city centre since they have covered all the needs of the inhabitants of the city from household appliances such as electronics, dresses, vegetables, jewelry to grocery items. For this reason, people get all their necessary products in one place which has made their life more convenient than in the past. For example, malls in New York city have various showrooms of world renowned brands in which a customer need not to go different place for their daily needs. This makes the city life comfortable because it requires less time, easy to get desired products.
On the other hand, due to the lack of customers, the shops in the local area have stopped their business. This will have negative impacts on the local thus most of the local lost their jobs. Therefore, the life becomes tougher in the country side. They will lose their interest in producing their product. Though, locals are the main producer of the product, they cannot sell their products directly to the customer. The mall's owner buys these things from local and sell these high prices. This will hike the price.
In conclusion, the local business is the source of income of mass people. If this income stop, then the local people become frustrated with their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40346875367 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2505030325 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5555555556 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333456973443 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101799186362 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802909321734 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208127348532 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10003263687 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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