In recent years, more and more people tend to live individualy. What are the causes of this trend? Does this have a positive or negative effect on society?
Currently solitary life has become widespread around the globe especially among young people which has raised the controversy if it would have detrimental effects on communities. some people argue against the situation while others see the bright sides of this style of life. In this essay i will discuss the issue and present my opinion.
To begin with, the bright side of living with family is discussed. Living with family has many advantages. For example, family, especially close-knit families, brings emotional support to their children which often reduces anxiety and depression. Another upside of this style is family brings food and financial support which is really essential for young people. Therefore, young people have the opportunity to continue their educations and learn more skills which would provide them to hunt better jobs. In addition to what was said, children have the chance to learn from their parents, sibling and even their extended families if they live with their family. For example, they learn how to deal with lack of money or other difficult condition merely by looking how their parents do so.
On the contrary, living alone or with friends also has it's bright side. Firstly, Through living alone, one can experience different problems first-hand and learn how to deal with by trial and error, though it is time and energy consuming, Learning through experience could not be substituted by looking how people solve their problems. secondly, young people need their own privacy which is impossible when they live with their family. Thirdly, many young people have to live alone because of moving to other cities or countries to study or to do business. Yet, another reason may be they have troubled families so they have to live alone.
I can see both side of the arguments and considering all the negative and positive sides, I would like to offer a middle way of living so that young people have both the plus sides. When people really need to live alone they should be permitted to do so in the meantime the family still can be supportive through regular visits.
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also, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for example, in addition, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01714285714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41186861252 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1381303741 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.294117647 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172410346315 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605347822111 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327814806257 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112858129403 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179602597182 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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