research in the field of science and technology is of utmost significance as it leads to breakthrough inventions. It os highly debatable issue whether government should do the spending on scientific research purposes or private companies should take the initiative. I partially agree with the aforesaid notion and believe that investment should be done equally by both.
To begin with, the government’s role in maintaining the science field is most crucial. Whatever discovery is made in this field directly proportionates to the regime. Secondly, the nation bags recognition internationally and the praise is all what comes to the government. Thirdly, any lead made in science affects the country and its population. For instance, the weather forecasts assist the agricultural nations to make appropriate arrangements for the crops. so, as it is for the betterment of a country as a whole , the governments should happily take the responsibility of managing and funding research in science field.
On the contrary, it would not be wrong to say that highly profiteering private companies should also contribute towards scientific research. The reason being that some developing nations may not have enough national capital to cope with the finances so here if any assistance is provided by the non-public set-ups it would be always more than welcome. Additionally, if the burden of the government is eased off a little then the national budget would be better spent on the healthcare and educational needs of the masses. Furthermore, a combined effort would lead to more close ties within the nation as it would create a sense of unity among the nation rulers and the private owners.
To encapsulate, the research and experiment field is one of the most important and expensive area that a country needs to spend on so it should be done through public and private collaboration.
research in the field of science and technology is of utmost significance as it leads to breakthrough inventions. It os highly debatable issue whether government should do the spending on scientific research purposes or private companies should take the initiative. I partially agree with the aforesaid notion and believe that investment should be done equally by both.
To begin with, the government’s role in maintaining the science field is most crucial. Whatever discovery is made in this field directly proportionates to the regime. Secondly, the nation bags recognition internationally and the praise is all what comes to the government. Thirdly, any lead made in science affects the country and its population. For instance, the weather forecasts assist the agricultural nations to make appropriate arrangements for the crops. so, as it is for the betterment of a country as a whole , the governments should happily take the responsibility of managing and funding research in science field.
On the contrary, it would not be wrong to say that highly profiteering private companies should also contribute towards scientific research. The reason being that some developing nations may not have enough national capital to cope with the finances so here if any assistance is provided by the non-public set-ups it would be always more than welcome. Additionally, if the burden of the government is eased off a little then the national budget would be better spent on the healthcare and educational needs of the masses. Furthermore, a combined effort would lead to more close ties within the nation as it would create a sense of unity among the nation rulers and the private owners.
To encapsulate, the research and experiment field is one of the most important and expensive area that a country needs to spend on so it should be done through public and private collaboration.
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- Unemployment is a growing problem all over the world. What are the causes of this ? What could be done to help tackle this issue? 61
- research in the field of science and technology is of utmost significance as it leads to breakthrough inventions. It os highly debatable issue whether government should do the spending on scientific research purposes or private companies should take the i 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Research
research in the field of science and technology ...
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Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...appropriate arrangements for the crops. so, as it is for the betterment of a count...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r the betterment of a country as a whole , the governments should happily take the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24422442244 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11528093901 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0793781127 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432099668755 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155552714869 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.201011092016 0.0667982634062 301% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301507218763 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.264908089319 0.056905535591 466% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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