Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than the any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
My writing
In accordance with researchers, humans’ characters are effected mostly by our natural features, meanwhile, experiencing is thought to be powerless in changing them. I am of the opinion of disagreement because experiences play a vital role in forming our skills.
On the one hand, there are more than eight billion people in the world but each of them is a unique individual with exclusive characteristics. Some people were born with kind and easy-going character and also the opposite ones.These kinds of indentity will be formed and improved along their growup so that this lead to a wide range of people believe these genetic traits will impact people’ life significantly.
On the other hand, along with a myriad of people, I strongly think that experiences have the most important influence on our social skills. Firstly, the environment that children are brought up will have the direct effects on their personality. For example: the child who was born as a happy person but in a broken family, as a consequence,he easily become a pessimistic one. Secondly, our experiences in life will broaden our mind, help us get fitted and perfect human beings. Throughout life, from communities and education, we can learn and change ourselves to be the useful ones in the world. Above all, their comfidence can be boosted up through out failure and succeed.
In conclusion, I agree that our genetic characteristics play a small part in the process of forming our character nut experiences that we gain from life will help us to be the perfect and qualified ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10344827586 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00618115149 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4616022139 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272043086371 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954241057056 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570612339609 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15754444129 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646576987073 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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