Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Research studies show that our biological traits have more influence on our personality and development than our social life experiences. This essay suggests that a persons social life experiences has more of a major influence on his or her behaviour and development.
Our environment is influenced by different factors. Innate characteristics is a part that can dictate our behaviour and the way we develop but this cannot be compared to the overwhelming influences social experiences can exact on an individuals personality. In other words, from an early age people are taught by various institutions in the society, the rights and wrongs in the life. Thus, based on this moral knowledge learnt by an individual, this will invariably have an impact on how their personality and development are shape now and in the future.
In addition, the social experiences and environment an individual encounters will have an effect on their personality and how they develop. For example, a person who lives in an aggressive and violent home from childhood has a 90% chance of getting involved in criminal acts, according to the 2020 Nigerian Social Service Commission Report. Consequently, when individual experiences a negative environment, there is a likelihood they develop bad behaviours and engage in cowardly acts in the society.
In conclusion, social life experiences with regards to what is learnt and percieved by an individual play a major part in shaping their personality and development. Biological characteristics however, have a mimimal influence on the personality and how a person develops in the society.
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3937007874 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25038568942 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4323739039 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336027632831 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145952897275 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110252261621 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236314423036 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113013658511 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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