Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the absence of a capital punitive measure, criminal acts of violence increases and lives are less secure. In essence, people argue that the death penalty is crucial to curb violent acts in the society. This essay agrees with this view.
The capital punishment is key to lowering the level of violence in the society because it will put fear in the minds of criminals. Peope who commit violents acts will think thoroughly whether or not to engage in such an act. Hence, the thoughts of a death penalty will discourage and deter them from criminal acts. According to a 2020 report from the Nigerian Criminal Justice System, the introduction of the death penalty by President Buhari, caused a significant decrease of about 90% in criminal acts in the country and as a result Nigeria is now a safe place for its citizens aswell as foreign investors and tourists.
In addition, capital punishment is important because it will make individuals realise violent acts have no benefits. Consequently the death penalty will make individuals who want to engage in criminal acts understand that the consequences are negative and severe which can ultimately result in death. Thus, with this mindset, less people will associate with violent behaviours. Consequent to this, the society will be safe and secure for all.
In conclusion, the death penalty is key to curbing violent crimes because it will put fear in the minds of violent individuals, which will act as a deterrent and it will make people know that the result of a violent crime is death.
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Suggestion: whether
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Suggestion: Consequently,
... realise violent acts have no benefits. Consequently the death penalty will make individuals...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...sult in death. Thus, with this mindset, less people will associate with violent beha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, as for, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95384615385 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63685755237 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8884294054 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215871725313 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994750752255 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666591747825 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153837000393 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709880830147 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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