An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. Some people say is a negative development.
Discuss and give your opinion.
Teenagers engage more now in playing computer games than in the past, hence, many persons argue that this is indeed a bad development. In my opinion, while playing computer games can be a preferred type of entertainment for young adults, overall, this can have detrimental effects on their social life.
Firstly, the fact that more and more teenagers now focus on playing computer games, this can have a negative impact on their social life. In other words, negative consequences such as isolation from the social world can be a result of young adults merely focusing on playing computer game as a source of their entertainment. Subsequently, this can invariably lead to a strained personal relationship with families and friends. For example, a recent survey showed that 87% of teenagers admitted they felt isolated from the world when they spend most of their time playing computer games.
Although, there are negative views to this development, it has to be said that there are positive sides to this argument, which must be considered. Many believe teenagers are now into playing computer games now more than ever because they enjoy it as a type of entertainment. Further more, perhaps playing computer games for young adults brings them more happiness and contentent, thus, they tend to engage more in this gaming world.
In conclusion, while, teenagers take part in playing computer games now, more than ever before because they enjoy and prefer this as a form of entertainment, I believe this can have negative consequences on their social life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14901960784 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7313943667 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501960784314 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.4715259882 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.3 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192858956879 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968481310227 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558304209039 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14381905245 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316832215889 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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