The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree
It is widely argued that a resultant effect of an increase in shopping online, is the eventual closure of stores in the towns and cities. In my opinion, i disagree with this point of view, as i believe that shops will always exist because indeed not all have the financial means to acess the internet and the fact that people do not feel safe engaging in online business transactions.
First of all, despite more and more people shopping online nowadays, one of the reasons stores will not close down is that there are other individuals who do not have the finincial capability to access the internet, hence they use the nearby stores to buy their goods and services. Consequently, because of limited funds, individuals have no other option than to purchase what they need from stores in their towns and cities. For instance, i do not buy items online because the salary i earn is strictly used for my spouse and children, thus, i buy goods from nearby stores.
Furthermore, most people tend to avoid shopping online because they do not feel safe and sure about the idea of buying goods online. Admittedly, security online is not 100% certified and trusted, hence inputing credit card details to buy online goods can be hijacked by scammers online who can steal an individual's personal details for illicit activities. Thus, as a result of the fear for internet fraudsters, people prefer to buy goods at their local shops.
In conclusion, the growth of purchasing goods and services online will not lead to closure of local stores because there are many persons who cannot subscribe to internet services due to limited funds, so they use nearby shops and the fact that indivuduals do not feel entirely protected shopping online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89491525424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49075279154 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505084745763 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2403222279 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.444444444 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7777777778 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7777777778 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254017293129 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108027483331 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732425710141 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171691516802 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495335335779 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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