Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of
violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
To restrict rate of crime capital punishment has made, However, imagining the world without that, it will lead to surplus the rate. I strongly believe that, The death penalty is crucial to maintain the peace in society But, Only in some cases like terrorist, murder and rape.
Firstly, Government ruling the country and created that particular act to fight against the violence. Mostly, the act applies on criminals, who had kill someone, or rapist. In some countries that rule is not made yet and crime rate rapidly increasing. For instantiate, In India rape cases are heading up since the last decade. So, the capital punishment were made to create the fear in society. In other words, If India applies that rule so, A person will thing twice before doing any crime because he knows the result.
Secondly, To makes every individual feel secured and safe, the death penalty has the huge role. For example, Research demonstrated that Dubai is the first country, which applied that rule and has least number of crime. Generally, A person can roam with fear and go for work at night shift without any worries, Moreover, they feel safer.
To concluded, The aim of the capital punishment to decline the crime rate and people do not need to think twice before going out. In my opinion, there can be other ways to deal to deal with the violence, Nevertheless the death penalty is the most effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83817427386 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38268953379 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7879381006 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199313389761 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063981715938 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547642116583 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122482719509 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447908480539 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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