Since the birth of psychology science, many scientists have argued about the origin of human personality and whether it is due genes or environment. Genetics has been found by science to be the main cause of who we are. From my point of view, although I am sure that genetics contributes considerably to the formation of our personalities, human experience is probably the main cause.
In fact, I think that when people are born, they come to life as a white page with just a little introduction at the beginning. What is already written is the codification of our genes and their following information concerning of who we will become. Is is undoubted that many research conducted on children and adults have shown a particular link with genetic heritage and aspects of our behaviour. For example, people with specific genes may be associated with an extrovert attitude while others with different genes to the actually oppose one. However, despite the powerful of genetics, this type of studies is not a simple task and we are far away from secure answers. Hence, as what has been discovered for now, I believe that environment is probably the most factor of influence.
Indeed, social background such as families, hometown and friends are not negligible factors. It is true that genes are written in the white page but there is also a huge space to fill which can modify things. Just considering the experiences and challenges that a human being has to face up during is entire life, we are far from the only genetics point of view. On the one hand, persons are unique and DNA is an expression of this, but situations in life lead people to experiment a enormous variety of feelings. Evidently, hanger, fear, happiness and many other emotions form us and there is no pre-factor that can avoid it.
To conclude, the complexity DNA gives us all the beautiful and particular features that build us but I strongly believe that what surrounds us has the largest effectiveness on how we behave and conduct our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for example, i think, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85838150289 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76476018744 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2355221594 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224911130721 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639932336195 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436043088106 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120884215782 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424976661512 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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