Medical research has become a debatable topic in recent years. Some individuals think that the government should be responsible for funding these projects, while others think private companies and individuals are responsible. Personally, I believe that the government should mainly invest in these fields with help from private companies to achieve more accomplishment.
On the one hand, some people claim that it is acceptable when individuals and private companies fund medical research as any medical research will help develop preventive plans and vaccines to prevent several diseases. Medical research by private companies will help the public find treatment and vaccination to demolish diseases and this would be essential for better health of the population. However, these researches would have property rights, intellectual and monopoly over the product during a given period. As a result their product would have a higher price and there will be limited access to the treatment or vaccines.
On the other hand, I still believe that it is the government responsible to invest in research to improve public health. Firstly, research from the government will help citizens have equality in medical access. It is the government responsible to improve the country's health and prevent any disease. Secondly, there is global cooperation among countries to help improve public’s health. For example, Covid -19 has become a global pandemic, and this kind of cooperation will help to achieve the results faster while it could be impossible between companies or individuals.
In conclusion, even though individual and private companies should help investing in medical research, I believe that the investment from the government could help the citizens access quality in medicine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56985294118 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84886145154 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492647058824 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4846596219 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394065805837 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149642248302 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832910151676 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252817441762 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452848451841 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.