research says more and more business training and business meetings are taking place online. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowaday, thanks to the advances in technology, people can easily access to the internet. Combined with the Covid disease, business guides and business meetings are held on the zoom, Microsoft Team, Google meet and so on. Thus, many companies change their work style to online. I concur that the advantage of this work-style outweighs its pitfall.
On the one hand, there is widespread agreement that many officers do not have enough computer literacy. But due to the plagues, many countries can not work normally, therefore, companies or held meetings online either become rapidly obsolete. The major pitfall of this method is cyber crime. Through the public meeting-website, hackers can hack into the network of a company, break their firewall and take the customers' information. Sometimes, the opponent company can use a specific software to strike heavily against others.
On the other hand, there are 2 main reasons to concur with this declaration. Firstly, online meetings are convenient. Workers can control remotely, plus, their timetable can be flexible. Take my sister as an example, since she works online, she has spent more time with family and her relationships, and improved her quality of life a lot. Secondly, it pushes society to make a big step in the “4.0 revolution”. Because of online training and virtual meetings, people have to build up computer literacy. No more face-to-face meetings, humans have to interact through computers. In fact, computer knowledge and internet cognition are not a quantum physics subject. With internet literate, people could be more careful when browsing the web and be aware when giving someone access to information.
In short, although there are some problems with cyber security but in general online training and virtual meetings are the main trend in the future, its advantage outweighs the disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...pany, break their firewall and take the customers information. Sometimes, the opponent co...
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Line 5, column 773, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'accesses'.
Suggestion: accesses
...he web and be aware when giving someone access to information. In short, although t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in fact, in general, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34459459459 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76185273562 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5949202232 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2631578947 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5789473684 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219030708852 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527322208799 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564700431678 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126953922291 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326050059012 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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