It is irrefutable that technology have been developed over the years and thus, several researches demonstrates that the most of the meetings, discussion and training regarding business are currently held in online method. Further, this essay will discuss how the merits outweigh the drawbacks of using online method for various aspects.
Firstly, advancement of technology has bought conveniency to many of the firms in order to conduct trainings and meetings. However, conducting meetings virtually, helps to avoid time consumption, which is the most primary advantage. For instance, If an employee is getting late for a meeting, he/she can connect to the colleagues via Internet while sitting at home rather than wasting time in travelling to reach at the workplace. Also, conference or the training sessions can be recorded with the help of online source. Moreover, usage of online method may have positive impact on the environment as well. To exemplify, less use of paper can reduce the extinction of cutting down the trees.
On the other hand, there are few demerits for using online resource. First and foremost is poor network connection can leads to disturbance in the work process. Secondly, one cannot analyse the reactions of the employees while in the meeting. For example, an entrepreneur unable to see the reactions or the facial expressions virtually of their workers.
To conclude, although there are few cons regarding the usageof online source, on the contrary, there are several pros as well which are useful while in the discussions and trainings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.312 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8046932096 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0508977837 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15686913318 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502513572192 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535545098653 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095988421386 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707564612378 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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