Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people engage in unhealthy activities.
What is the cause of this?
What can be done?
There are two main reasons that make people still engage in unhealthy activities even though it perhaps has negative impact on humans’ health. To begin with, individuals seem to ignore the most information published by the specialized expert and go on doing the activities that are unfavorable because they are perhaps accustomed to that activities and find difficulty in getting rid of bad habits regardless of the alarm to people. For example, a variety of people at the young age bracket around the world tend to stay up late until midnight although it is capable of causing some severe ailments especially cancer; however, almost of them cannot give up that habit because they must finish their multiple tasks to meet the need of both teachers and enterprises and other prevalent reasons, so sleeping earlier is impossible for them. Additionally, living area can be the reason that cause this issue because people who reside in a region with underprivileged conditions are unable to approach information immediately in the absence of contemporary gadgets to catch up with the ongoing affair.
Several measures can be taken to deal with this issue. First of all, both parents should orient their offspring from the young age to follow favorable habits and convey useful information about health issues in order to prevent them from approaching bad habits and being affected by the danger of bad habits because junior children absorb what they are taught more effectively than other age bracket, so their consciousness will be improved remarkably which will enable them to distinguish activities whether they good or bad for their health. In addition, people can watch some videos on social media that reinforce their motivation to be out of bad habits and participate in healthy activities. Furthermore, another solution can be used to cope with this issue is the addition of health topic in education program because of its effectiveness to promulgate both side of some activities which assist individuals not to involves in activities exacerbating their health.
In conclusion, bad habits are derived from numerous aspects in daily life such as lack of clear information, living environment and others. To address this issue, people must enhance their understanding by distinctive methods with a view not to engaging in bad activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 921, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: You might need to use the base form of the verb here: 'involve'.
Suggestion: involve
...ivities which assist individuals not to involves in activities exacerbating their health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2420212766 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83208468367 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582446808511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.361559666 49.4020404114 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.1 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3061070692 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119300603795 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479635181754 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190279532522 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739143885831 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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