Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagre
The help poorer countries of the rich countries has been receiving a great level of public concern. The rich countries often hand money for them but there is no doubt that it is not good way to help tjem out of the poverty .
To begin with, rich countries transfer money for poor countries can make them rely on the rich countries. Because they think that rich countries will always help them when they have problems, so they do not need to try to out of the poverty. Instead of that rich countries can invest money for some industry or set up company in poor countries, help them find the potential financial and develop them. Beside rich countries can also provide jobs for poor countriess' population. I think these are the good ways to help poor countries improve the economy.
On top of that, the rich countries do not always develop, sometimes they can have unprofitable investment which make them damage economy so they can not provide money for other countries. Beside, I think inhabitant in rich countries can be against for this policy because they think that they work hard but the money back to others who do not relate with them. On the other hand, suddenly rich countries can be damaged by pandemic so they are not enough money to provide for their inhabitant.
To sum up, Giving money will make poorer countries depend on the rich countries and especially, the rich countries can meet with difficulties from economy and resident. For these reasons it is not good to stransfer money for poor countries from rich countries
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- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagre 61
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...good way to help tjem out of the poverty . To begin with, rich countries transf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75746268657 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40893914354 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470149253731 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0390184655 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393995886438 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211545794292 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696447207299 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309126259153 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744107847725 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.