Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that poor countries is often given money by rich country but it can't solve indigene.So,Developed countries should offer some types of help the poor countries than give them money.Personally,I completely argee with this view.
The argument in favour of rich country should give money,food or medicine to some undeveloped countries but in my view,it makes that undeveloped countries always rely on that rich countries and the inhabitants of that country are uncare about earning money or food and Usually waiting for subsidies from rich country and Gradually that country won't have budget and that country will be poor forever.For example, Some country in Africa falls into poverty.Some countries don't have enough money to buy food and medicine and lots of inhabitants in that country gradually die in high concentration and some rich countries sometimes give money and medicine to healing to people and inhabitants are thinking of rich countries have to be responsible for give money to them and it effects negatively to the financial budget of that countries.
On the other hand, I am convinced that rich countries should have solution to solve the poverty of that poor country because not always give money to them so for that solution,the government will propagate to the people about how to plants food crops and The government can export that food to neighboring country and they can improve financial budget and gradually that country became the on-dining country.Or no,that country will be unable to be autonomous in earning money and maintaining a stable country.
In conclusion, I believe that rich countries besides giving money to poor countries,The rich countries should show how to earn money and plant food crops to export to some country and that's the great way to maintain the budget in the country gradually do not need subsidies from rich countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, so, for example, in conclusion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90381498792 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428104575163 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.2975951904 374% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.436822288 49.4020404114 473% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 396.0 106.682146367 371% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.5 20.7667163134 368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.75 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.537343808967 0.244688304435 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.416977731348 0.084324248473 494% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642328152029 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.416977731348 0.151304729494 276% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642328152029 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.2 13.0946893788 315% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.66 50.2224549098 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 11.3001002004 291% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.95 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.1190380762 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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