Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. Do you agree or disagree?
Poverty has proven to be a major issue in the 21- century around the globe. It is often thought that, the wealthy states occasionally, privade the amount of money to poorer countries, howewer, it can not resolve poverty. On the one hand, developed countries able to give a variety of aids to the non-developed states rather than financial support. In this essay, I will analyze the causes and privades solution by recommending a good quality of educational system.
One of the main cause of the poverty can not be solved is low level of knowledge. Majority underdeveloped countries have not to the ability to create contemprory educational qualification. To make matter worse, the state government should control generations' capability with liability. This is examplified by the 60 percentage of colombians are living in the outside. Moreover, the number of adelesents are suffering from getting a quality of knowledge to attend to the school. To address this issue, it is difficult to find school buildings in the Colombia border villages. Thus, a range of parents do not enough money for support sufficient condition to their children by educating them with a great quality of comprehensive education. To do this, if government can not able to assist their border regions of educational systems, the proportion of poor humans category will continue to rise signaficantly. In order to eliminate this problem, developed countries might help to poor countries' economical growth by using essential infrastructure to
build the huge quality educations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29149797571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11088227879 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6923076923 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242395761701 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704708518691 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952749636688 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129521818987 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935324395979 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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