Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Thesedays, money is the best way to help poor countries to over the difficulties but it is not resolve the starving remarkbly. Some people said that rich countries should help the poor ones some others way rather than give money. From my point of view, I totally agree with this idea.
Giving money is the good way to solve the difficulties to the poors immediatly but it is not useful to the longer time. For examples, the money is just used to give each households in the poor countries and they cover the bills in a short time, after that they are run out of money. That time they will not have enough money to buy food and vital goods for family and comeback to the time of poverty.
There are some better ways to make difficulty countries develop than giving financial aid, such as giving seeds to plant in order to help them manage vegetables by themselves, creating the oppotunities about jobs in companies of wealthy countries, educating some techniques about developing economic... the poorer contries will chage gradually and have their stable budget.
Although money is the way to help difficulty countries, it is not bring the longer value. Developed countries should give different ways to helps the poor ones have a stable income to develop the economic.
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- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree You should write at lea 56
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries but it does not solve poverty Therefore developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...to help difficulty countries, it is not bring the longer value. Developed countries s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80909090909 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48517920933 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4113140061 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364071034993 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14803053863 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11192722405 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234899905232 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652164737886 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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